Kyler - language paper
Here are a couple of Trinity's Language arts samples. She finds it easy and I can see an improvement in her sentence structure. Below I have copied and pasted the outline of a story she has begun.
Above is a Language test Trinity took
November 24, 2011.
The Last Of the King Unicorns by Trinity Brinkman
Topic-what the story is about
My story is about a boy that just moved to his new house on his birthday and they had nothing to give him and they happened to unpacked a old rocking horse . A fairy comes one night and turned the rocking horse into a unicorn
Sequence - the order in which a story is written
1. first :boy moves in to new house
2. second : it is his birthday and they have nothing to give him and they were to busy to go out shopping
3. next : they found a old rocking horse in the
basement that someone hade left behind what was weird about it was that it was addressed to them
4. then : they give the rocking horse to James
5. after: it’s the middle of the night James is sleeping a fairy comes and she said little foal little foal come come to the land of unicorns they are in great danger!
6. Unicorn city was attacked by ????
7. next : the king dies in war and Rockster becomes King
8. Next: Rockster becomes king
9. ????
Characters – people, animals, or things with lifelike qualities.
1. James is a shy boy that just turned 11
2. Rocking Horse/Unicorn is named Rockster
3. fairy is a girl
4. king Unicorn likes cream pies
5. his friends names are Unicorette,
Feelings – how your characters are feeling
James – sleepy
Rockster- excited
Fairy- worried
King Unicorn- happy
Setting – where and when the story takes place
When- Time stays the same here but passes by in Unicorn city
Where-Unicorn city
Problem – something that goes wrong in the story or with the characters
They’re being attacked
Conclusion- how the problem was solved
They win the battle and Rockster becomes king. He comes back to invite James on an adventure to Unicorn City
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